Give them what they want

[thunderknives.livejournal.com]

Feedback/Critique Post

Just like it says; leave the names of your characters here so that others can give you feedback on how you play them. Anonymous commentary is allowed. However, if you have critiques and such, I ask that you please be mature/constructive in posting them and not all "LOLOL, UR CHAR SUX!1!" and the like.

With that in mind... begin!

Comments

[hanakirei85.livejournal.com]

Hinamori, James, and um... I won't ask for Tod, since he's yet to be played. XD but yeah. HIT ME! <3

[alexander.livejournal.com]

I've never interacted with either and I know your canons in passing, disclaimer.

Hinamori as far as I can gather is an addict to HAIL AIZEN. I've never interacted with her, but she seems to have a good sort of... erhm... >_> sheepy response. Not that that's a bad thing, you know?

OKAY, as far as playing goes I'm not exactly sure, since I haven't been following the threads as much as I should, but it seems like you have that down pat!

Onto James. Uhm. ... I've never read anything with James ... uhm. I read the intro post? :o

I DEMAND MORE JAMES (in general) and hopefully Soujirou and Hinamori can meet :3

[splashbeat.livejournal.com]

Hinnaamorriiiii~ <3 <3 <3 I love how you play her so much. She's so adorable and cute and completely infatuated with Aizen but at the same time cares for lil' Toshi. That and she's SO SLICK. "Who have you been staying with?" "The museum manager."

And I haven't seen much of James except in crack chats. But either way he's AWESOME. Too bad Demyx gets annoyed with him. D:

[amoonlight.livejournal.com]

I <3 your Hinamori~ Roxas has yet to interact with her but the posts I've read with Hinamori in it rock my socks :O U DE AWESME!! XD *cough* She's IC but at the same time, you add your own little thing (SRY, poor vocabulary) to her that makes her... awesome? Haha. Yeah..

But I wish James would post more!! It'd bring back memories from years back when I watched/read Pokemon.

LOL MY CHAR SUX!!1!

[alexander.livejournal.com]

1000fish - Delirium from Sandman. From vol 8 or 9 or so.

ora_serrata - The Corinthian, also from Sandman ._. Post-series.

atsehaske - Lucifer, from Sandman and Lucifer. Pre-Lucifer, around vol 8 or Sandman.

anraku - Soujirou, from Rurouni Kenshin. Pre-Kyoto arc.

LOLNOTHEYDON'T.

[damangedone.livejournal.com]

I know very little of Sandman, but I researched it and I think you do them well. :D

Sadly, I know nothing of Soujirou >>;

_{Corinthian will never have Riku's eyes. EVAR! He can keep dreaming, but he'll have to settle for BELGIAN WAFFLES.}

[amoonlight.livejournal.com]

destiny_key <- Roxas :O

[ora-serrata.livejournal.com]

Your Roxas seems pretty IC to me x3 Roxas always seemed more like the "..." half of the Akuroku duo. I'll be interested to see where you take Roxas in Paixao!

[thunderknives.livejournal.com]

pirate_knight - B. Jenet. Garou: Mark of the Wolves, post game.

keep_to_myself - Raven. Teen Titans, animated series version, mid-season 5.

walking_goddess - Shihouin Yoruichi. Bleach, anime version, post Soul Society Arc.

truewaterknight - Chris Lightfellow. Suikoden III, post game.

thunderknives - Larxene. Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories, pre-game.

[ora-serrata.livejournal.com]

RIGHTO. You have a talent for playing the ladies ;)

I like your Larxene, she amuses me endlessly. I'm glad we have one, she's one of my favorite Org members.

Chris I don't know her canon, but she seems like a consistently played character and our Suikoden-muns don't seem peeved, so EXCELLENT. EXCELLENT INDEED.

Yoruichi - ... I've got nothing really. I don't know Bleach that well, all I know is that people tell me Yoruichi and Soi Fon are girlfriends. AND WE HAVE NO SOI FON...lady.

Raven - Seems appropriate for the Raven from Teen Titans, animated version. I'm more familiar with her in the comics, but heh. From the brief clips of the animated version she seems in character.

Jenet - Awesome.

._. Uhm. I'd like to play with you sometime. >_> yes. Not sure if any of my characters would ever interact with any of yours unless we forced them. Perhaps ...since Sou is buddy buddy with Aizen... but yeah.

Uhm... I wish I had some crit.

HOW'S MY DRIVING?!

[takethekill.livejournal.com]

Haine Rammsteiner - takethekill - Miwa Sirow's manga, DOGS

Edward Wong Hau Pepelu Tivrusky IV (aka. Ed) - tomatobox - the anime, Cowboy Bebop

DRIVING+100

[damangedone.livejournal.com]

Not familiar with Haine, but I enjoy him from what I've read.

YOU = BEST EDWARD EVAR. ftw.

... me too? ;-;

[ex-sprightf.livejournal.com]

MAKIMIRI~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[1000fish.livejournal.com]

I've... uhm. Never played with Hakkai... or seen any of Hakkai's threads ._.;;;;;;;;;;; SO NO COMMENT D:

FAI! FAI! FAI! Fai is so cute :3 And he seems very true to the TRC that I've read/seen! However, VAMPIRESSSSSSSSS I mean. Uhm. Awesome job with Fai :D

L! L! L! Yanku thought L was nice and wanted his cookies! And L is awesome, but I'm not familiar with him as much as the others. But it was fun :D

CARBUNCLE! SO CUTE SOCUTE SOCUTE! I WANNA THREAD WITH CARBY.

MAKIMIRI PLAYS THE CUTEST CHARACTERS. Just someday I'd like to see Makimiri play a bloody psychopath because I'm weird x3. But yes. Very cute and very good :3

[subversive.livejournal.com]

Oh damn. D:

Kadaj and Zim, plz. I know I've failed spectacularly in the past with the former, so yes. FOR THE LOVE OF GOD be honest, or I won't get the chance to improve.

DAJU!!!!!!!!

[alexander.livejournal.com]

I giggle at Daju-Del interactions x3. Also, your Kadaj is awesome. It's hard to play Kadaj, I think (because I can't, ROFL). You do a good job of balancing. Uhm. No real crit ^-^

On Zim, I don't know Zim's canon AT ALL LOLZ. Uhm. BUT HE SEEMS APPROPRIATELY CAPSLOCKY AND FUN. He and Luce should hang. Yeah. HOMIES IN TAKING OVER THE WORLD only Luce doesn't really wanna. yes :3

[sharp-gust.livejournal.com]

skymetal Cloud Strife (Kingdom Hearts version)

blitzing_by Tidus (Final Fantasy X)

dnc_ays Dante (Devil May Cry series)

sharp_gust Xaldin (Kingdom Hearts II, of course~)

Enjoy.

See? I'm using it just like I said I would.

[thunderknives.livejournal.com]

Well, even though we've scened a couple of times now, I can only really give you my thoughts on Dante. He seems spot on to me, although I've only played a small bit of DMC1. But I can tell that you're doing a great job with a fun character like him. I'm looking forward to seeing him, Jenet and the Prince do next. Babysitting!

We totally should scene Xaldin and Larxene sometime.

[wyna-hiros.livejournal.com]

smoking_gun3 - Genjyo Sanzo, Saiyuki series.

[alexander.livejournal.com]

You play one of the most in character Sanzos I've seen :3 I wish he was around a little more D: Since I've never gotten to thread with him. But *-* Awesome.

[averyspecialguy.livejournal.com]

averyspecialguy - Jack Skellington

....And he's all, for now. XD I'll post again if I get more charas!

[alexander.livejournal.com]

Uhhhhhhhh. I've never threaded with Jack D: and haven't read Jack's threads D: but you get kudos for picking him up XD;

[doomweasel.livejournal.com]

data_dogg - Ein from Cowboy Bebop

myheadsnotbig - Dib from Invader Zim

*puts on armor* All right guys, hit me with your best shot!

[alexander.livejournal.com]

EIN!!!!!! Your Ein is awesome x3. For a dog. especially for a dog? Heh. DEL IS LOOKING FOR A DOG *-* Erhm. Anyway. Yes. I don't know the canon, so I can't make IC judgments there XD

AND DIB. Ahahaha. I don't know this canon either ._. but he seems appropriately the counterpart of Zim XD. I can't wait to see them interact. Uhm. Lesseeeeeeee...

no, no idea XD

[splashbeat.livejournal.com]

12petals - Hitsugaya Toushirou, Post-Soul Society arch
godmodd - Aizen Sosuke, Post-Soul Society arch
streetsmarter - Hayner, Post KHII
splashbeat - Demyx, Pre-CoM

[amoonlight.livejournal.com]

LOLOL, UR CHARS SUX!1! Just kidding!!! Haha. It's actually the exact opposite of that. I read several of your posts with Hitsugaya and so far, I think everything is IC~ It's great how you make him the serious yet childish character he is :) You mastered keeping him sophisticated and simple at the same time XDDD (that made no sense). FUFUFUFU I haven't kept up with your Aizen D: *shot* And that's the character I think you play with the most enthusiasm. Bad bad me ;_;

MORE HAYNER!! Well.. actually.. I only read one thread with him in it so no props for me there... I'm so lazy. But I <3 his dialouge!! That's gotta count. *cough* And from what I could gather, he's IC as well~

DEMYX ROKS MY SOKS SO MUCH, HE CAN HAVE ACCESS TO MY SOCK DRAWER :O which I don't even have. hehe. I'm going to read more of your previous posts with Demyx soon-- but based on the scene he's doing with little Roxas-mun, you have him down pat. He has just the right amount of intelligence XDDD *shuts up*

[paperpulp.livejournal.com]

EH, SHOWER ME WITH CRIT, YES >3

callmedidi Death
keyofhell Duma
freya_erda Chii
I also have onmyouji_subaru Subaru if anyone wants to criticize his first thread :3

[alexander.livejournal.com]

Death: I already critt'd you, silly :3

Duma: HEEE DUMAAAA. He's hard to play, I think. Especially if you haven't read Lucifer :3. He's a bit simple though. He's the compassionate type. I think that sometimes when he's irritated (in Paixao) he shouldn't be. He seems, to me, (especially in Lucifer) more of the patient, unirritable kind of person. But other than that, great job :D

Chii: ....deadfromcute.

[spirit-seer.livejournal.com]

Just spirit_seer (Yun, Suikoden III, post-ritual) for now. ...I'll app more characters eventually I swear.

I'm working on voice issues that may or may not exist at the moment, buuut if anyone familiar with canon can point out anything I'm doing wrong, PLZ DO. :')

[alexander.livejournal.com]

YUN IS SO CUTE *-* uhm, and Nothing else to say XD;

[onedeadwulf.livejournal.com]

I don't think I'll get any responses, but I'm curious anyway...

I play Graywolf. Who is currently dealing with trying to be nice, after being a jerk for so long. :D

[ex-sprightf.livejournal.com]

[dark-turk.livejournal.com]

Vincent and Ikki here. Tell me how I play I guess. >.> I kinda expect people not to like Vincent for some reason..

[amoonlight.livejournal.com]

AISODJFAIOS UR VINCENT SUKS >D. Not. I don't get why you think people wouldn't like your Vincent-- don't degrade yourself or Vinny~ D: No, I have not interacted with either Vinny or Ikki but STILL. Your general sophistication in your writing, I think, could be raised just a tad bit... that would make a big difference :O From what I've read, Vincent could be a little bit more stoic as well... Vinny the Vampire!! *shot* Just my personal opinion though. Other than that, I really liked your interactions with Lucrecia-mun (b/c I'm a Vincent and Lucrecia shipper XD). *cough cough* Anyhow~ Your insight on his feeling is a nice personal touch, as are some of his thoughts. Keep going at it!! =]]]

[shiningenergy.livejournal.com]

cold_destroyer, Kanda Yuu; D.Gray-man.
shiningenergy, Nekoi Yuzuriha; X/1999.

C'mon, people, I know you've got some concrit in you. D:

[thunderknives.livejournal.com]

Yuzuriha is a total sweetheart, I really like her and I really don't have anything to critque regarding her. :D

Kanda on the other hand is such an arsebag, but from what I've seen about D.Gray Man, he seems to be very much in character too! Looking forward to that scene he's in with Raven. Aheh.

Because I'm too lazy to comment from my personal journal lolololz

[deadly-velvet.livejournal.com]

deadly_velvet - Yazoo (FFVII: AC). There's not much in canon to work from, so a bunch of his personality is based on analyzing and whatnot, but I could be totally off with him.

So. Um. Yes. Not that he's had much interaction. Um. Sorry? D:

[sandalxhat.livejournal.com]

HOI! <333 Xandrei here and I play:

sandalxhat Urahara Kisuke
shootxtoxdeath Ichimaru Gin
crushed_ocular Ulquiorra

The lovely Bleach trio! <3333 Shoot away bebes, I can take it *_*!

[lilchu.livejournal.com]

yeah. Minnie-mun here. Anything pointers? *willing to learn!!!!*

[liririn.livejournal.com]

...omg. D: I know Nill is supposed to be mute, but you don't know what would happen to her in a year...! BESIDES, IT'S PAIXAO. [/bad excuse]

Lirin - liririn

Linali Li - soundsplitter

Nill - saint_dove

[yuki-eiri01.livejournal.com]

Ah! I'm so sorry for being so freaking slow DDD:

Yuki Eiri, Oscuro, Tifa Lockhart, Jack Sparrow, Desire, and Rukia up for critique! :DD