If irregular behavior persists, please call this number

[thunderknives.livejournal.com]

And also because Lina was being weird and paranoid...

Feedback/Critique Post

Leave the names of your characters here so that others can give you feedback on how you play them. Anonymous commentary is allowed. However, if you have critiques and such, I ask that you please be mature/constructive in posting them and not all "LOLOL, UR CHAR SUX!1!" and the like.

Comments

[thunderknives.livejournal.com]

- Morrigan Aensland
- B. Jenet
- Raven
- Shihouin Yoruichi
- Chris Lightfellow
- Larxene

[alexander.livejournal.com]

I wish I had something else to say |D but I haven't really interacted with most/any of your characters. I'm a fan of your Larxene however.

[photomortem.livejournal.com]

I... I... Damnit, I haven't actually threaded with any of your characters yet, Jon.

But I hope to soon with BB and Raven. I think you have her voice down damn good, actually.

Your Larxene is love from that Lumberjack thread I read, srsly.

[doomweasel.livejournal.com]

I have to be honest, I've been taking elements of your Larxene and incorporating it into my own portrayal of her on another RP. Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery? :)

[spirit-seer.livejournal.com]

Your Chris is fine, I promise. :] When I was playing through her chapters last week, I kept thinking "oh yeah Jon is doing good because of this and that and YEAH GO JON :DDDD" and other ramblings that were not at all coherent. I'm just hoping we get Nash or the knights or something at some point; I think interacting with them would bring out her full potential. Or... something. Yeah.

And your Larxene is made of complete win. :') Also I've loved Jenet ever since THE OLD DAYS at Ergheiz so yeah. I wish I could comment on the others, but alas, too many canons I'm not familiar with.

[zo-to.livejournal.com]

-Riku
-Kiara
-Beast Boy
-Kiriwar
-Rin
-Meowth
-Mina Hakuba
-Dipp
-Reno

[alexander.livejournal.com]

1- Dipp is the win.
2- Kiriwar is cool. I'm hoping for more of his like OM NOM NOMing people side which we finally got to see in the more recent thread :3
3- I feel like you've got a solid Reno voice, as I've been prodding him with spoons for a while.
4- As your sensei for the Rin no Battoru, you have my stamp of approval.

I don't have a lot to say on the other characters. Uh, but much Snow love.

[averyspecialguy.livejournal.com]

averyspecialguy: Jack Skellington
weeatbodies: Zetsu
floofy_chivalry: Sir Sword Knight

[love-me-blind.livejournal.com]

I love your Jack. He's curious, adorable, and fun. Zetsu is crazy and funny from what I've seen and I have not read any of Sir Swords stuff.

[argentum-basium.livejournal.com]

I DO NOT APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENTARY, SIR. DDD:

... Kadaj & Zim. Please be as brutally honest as possible? I will not spaz, promise. ♥

[love-me-blind.livejournal.com]

I think you play them perfectly.

I like(d) Invader Zim, so Zim doesn't annoy me one bit, rather you amuse the hell out of me with him. He's fuckin' hilarious, really!

Kadaj is just beautiful. I love the way you write, speak, act him out. I wouldn't change a damn thing except having Kadaj shag and love Ai forever ^_~ Just, uh, don't kill my Ai?? XD

[wyna-hiros.livejournal.com]

Genjyo Sanzo.

[takethekill.livejournal.com]

I think you do an excellent job as Sanzo. Really, I've been impressed. Sanzo is (surprisingly) very alike Haine.

Keep it up. :)

[love-me-blind.livejournal.com]

- Princess Ai

[alexander.livejournal.com]

I don't know your canon, but I did some wiki and some fancomm surfing and I was under the impression she's ... well, I guess I was expecting Ai to be more ballsy. But I've not actually read the manga, so I could be completely off.

ORLY

[waffle-in-em.livejournal.com]

waffle_in_em - GIIIIIIIIR
little_nutmeg - Megara
deadly_velvet - Yazoo
deliciously_aya - Ayame Sohma
myuu_myuu - Mew DOESN'T COUNT 'CAUSE SHE TOTALLY HASN'T ENTERED YET. >(

BE MEAN IF YOU HAVE TO. I CAN TAKE IT, SUUUUCKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS. >>

Re: ORLY

[love-me-blind.livejournal.com]

Dude, I love all your chars canonly! I haven't met a more perfect Ayame yet. It's like reading the manga version when I read your posts. ^^ I have yet to see GIR or Mew in Action. Megara is delightfully sassy.... she has to be sarcastic like 24-7. Yazoo is gorgeous elegant and whiny and... ^^ job well done.

[spirit-seer.livejournal.com]

Yun (spirit_seer) & Ichigo (enviousfruit). Please be honest, I can take it. ^^;

[alexander.livejournal.com]

I haven't threaded with either of them :x I've had crack conversation with both of them. I like how you've done both of them, but I don't know Yun's canon (like, at all).

[roaring.livejournal.com]

Gunzi, knuckleclaws
Lorelei, wellbred
Shiki, coldblade

And soon to be amongst us...
Kazi, twitchysmile

[roaring.livejournal.com]

Also, um. Don't comment anonymously on mine. Okay?

[jade-chocolat.livejournal.com]

Suisei Seki, jade_chocolat .

... yeah, that's as soon as I play her? XD;

[takethekill.livejournal.com]

Haine (takethekill)
Ed (tomatobox)

[thunderknives.livejournal.com]

Some of your comments/responses with Ed make me laugh so much, seriously. Keep it up! :D

didn't we do one of these?

[ex-sprightf.livejournal.com]

Re: didn't we do one of these?

[alexander.livejournal.com]

DANNY. In the beginning you were lacking some confidence and it showed, but I think you are EXCELLENT. I love Daniel.

... and I haven't threaded with anyone else :x so no real concrit.

[hrung-survivor.livejournal.com]

Ford Prefect!

I'd really appreciate critique of my attempted use of britspeak, I'd hate to be doing it wrong and would simultaenously like to learn to improve ^^

[alexander.livejournal.com]

HEH. I can't crit the britspeak, as I'm not a brit. But I do enjoy Ford, and the adult shop thing XD

[amoonlight.livejournal.com]

o roxas @ destiny_key
o xigbar @ sniperchat

[alexander.livejournal.com]

:( never threaded with them either. I enjoyed your Xigbar's journal entry, however. And I think you'll do a good Roxas :3

[alexander.livejournal.com]

♠ 1000fish - Delirium
♠ anraku - Soujirou
♠ missmatches - Noki
♠ repudiated - Nataku
♠ ora_serrata - the Corinthian
♠ atsehaske - Lucifer Morningstar
♠ acicularity - Sabra (Player G)
♠ lockingland - Akira Udou
♠ shroomette - Kinoko
♠ permitting - Inu

Hit me with your best shot |D

[photomortem.livejournal.com]

I... I... I haven't threaded with anyone but Kinoko, Inu, Noki, and Cori D: And Cori was so brief, too.

But... I love Kinoko to itty pieces, and I think you're doing an awesome job with her personality right now :x

Inu is ... perfect as he is. I'm so serious it's not even funny. I loves him to death D: *gives him LOVES.*

Noki hurts my brain. A lot. She's so hyperactively odd it's not even funny, but I don't know her canon so I can't really crit that as right or wrong XD But you and Kei seem to know wtf you're doing.

Cori scares me. Sufficient to say. And my Rikumuse doesn't like him, but that doesn't count. I think from what I've read of him you're doing things right, but that wasn't a lot of reading.

wewt

[doomweasel.livejournal.com]

Ein - data_dogg

Dib - myheadsnotbig

Sora - lichtes_krieger


Please tell me I must know the truuuuuuth!!

damnit I need to give CRIT.

[photomortem.livejournal.com]

SORA SORA SORA SORA.

Your Sora is love. He is probably one of the better one's out there, I think. Appropriately... Sora-ish. Usually RP'd Sora's annoy me, but no such thing yet. Just plznoabsoluteidioticyD:

Invader Zim started irritating me when I watched it, but Dib seems correct from what I remember of him. He and the Turks need to gang up on Zim.

I haven't actually threaded with Ein, nor have I crackchatted with him, or even really like Cowboy Bebop that much, but I love what you've done with him.

[soundsplitter.livejournal.com]

-Linali
-Lirin
-Luki
-Miyabi
-Nill
-Rafe

homg critique oh noez.

[alexander.livejournal.com]

LINALI. she's such a humanitarian XD and the LINALIBUS. I have read up to ch 85 of DGM XD uh uh uh. And I think you've done a superb job balancing her softer side and then her like DIG IN THE HEELS AND SHOW YA WHAT 'M MADE OF, which is still for a good cause and yeah.

I played with Lirin a really long time ago when I entered Soujirou. But I haven't seen her since :x

LUKI. NOKI LOVES YOU EVEN THOUGH SHE SAYS YOU'RE FAT.

... I really have no crit :x

Like, at all :x

[onedeadwulf.livejournal.com]

~Graywolf.

I don't really expect any feedback, since no one knows him, but hey. :D Its worth a shot!

[alexander.livejournal.com]

I saw ... like a few episodes of Monster Rancher once :D... but yeah, Graywolf wasn't in them :x

[cowardly-hero.livejournal.com]

Timon the loud mouth meerkat

[doomweasel.livejournal.com]

Sometimes Timon seems a little too mean, but then again the last time I watched the movies was a long time ago. All the insults probably went over my head. XD

[isaacmustdie.livejournal.com]

Haven't interacted with anyone yet, looking forward to doing so and saving a place in this thread so other people can tell me how I did!

Karst

[talionisshinra.livejournal.com]

I haven't done much, but I'll throw Rufus Shinra out there for thoughts.