Snaps Cups / HMD!

[overlords_wrath]

SNAPS CUPS / HMD

For those that are new, snaps cups is a meme for love! Can't have enough of that right? |Db

But this time around we're also going to have, for the first time ever, an combined HMD. I'm sure you all know what that's about. We've never really done one, but we thought we'd give it a go for once! Anon is on, but please do not abuse it. And remember good critique includes not only what one might be doing wrong, but also what their doing right. Sometimes pointing out something good that they should do more of is useful.

Of course, you are more than welcome to opt out of the HMD part!

Edit: And... I think we're gonna call a blanket, let's not talk about tagging speed? Given the time of year and all... I think we're all guilty eh? |Da

Comments

[a-spikyfriend.livejournal.com]

Yar. Have a go.

masterfulflames
myfearsmylies
a_spikyfriend
amthebadwolf

paixaonpcsorg

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

I'ma get this ball rolling.

You know how much I love your Hades, right? That is a character NOT easy to play and you do it to his full potential: a lot of easy charm, confidence and unrelenting evil comes through in your voice for him and I just freaking LOVE IT, man.

Admittingly, I don't have a lot of experience with your other characters, but they seem pretty spot on. They all have very different personalities but you somehow seem to balance them without having them bleed into each other.

The only real crit I could give you comes down to stylistic preferences, I think. You tend to post in present tense which is sort of jarring for me when the rest of the comm's logs are in past tense. Like I said, it's not a real criticism and one I easily overlook, so, uh...take from it what you will? XD;;

In conclusion, I like your ability to be evil. >:3

[fuzzy-squish.livejournal.com]

I definitely love your Kairi. I have the same thing as Rue with the fact you post present tense...but just as with her, it's easy to get over and not really an issue at all. XD

But I like that your Kairi is more independent, but still really cheerful. Just the right mix of boyish and feminine~

[isonen.livejournal.com]

Xemnas... Oh, Xemnas. I hate how much I love him. =p I hope he never leaves Lenne alone, I'd miss him. *is shot by muse*

Your Hades is fantastic, I love your grasp of all his aspects, the temper, the humour, everything. <3

Kairi is adorable, I just love her, and I was never a fan of her in the games, so you've really won me over. XD Naja I don't know in canon, but I love everything I've seen of her here, so that's a good thing, right? XD And again with Rose I wasn't really a fan of her in canon, but you've made me one after seeing you play her. ♥

I... have no crit. I suck at giving crit. STAY AWESOME, OR ELSE.

[shadowdancer09.livejournal.com]

Echoing what everyone else has said about Hades. You play an EPIC Hades.

Same thing with Kairi and Xemnas. You know I love your Xemnas to bits "GOD DAMMIT, MARLUXIA" and Kairi's just so much fun. I need to bounce more characters off of her... Or just bounce off of her more in general.

Also echoing everyone on the switch in tenses front. XD It is a little jarring sometimes, but I'll admit, when I get the chance to, I do kind of like giving present tense a shot from time to time. lol, I know I've done it a few times when it's just been you and me in the thread.

[sumofallfayth]

Because I totally can't sleep /sob

sdfkjsdf I just want to say omg your characters are AMAZING. I used to really not like Kairi, especially the KHI version, but yours is just the perfect mix of awesome and win. She's funny, and serious, and basically it's your fault I have a muse for her at all now.

And Hades... oh god Hades. I'm sooooo glad we got to do the kidnapping Yuna plot because that was just the most fun thing ever. Hades can totally talk to her whenever. :3 And while I'm on this subject. He's just plain epic. I love how you write him. He's creepy and amazing and just makes me giggle with glee every time you post. And I love watching him with the other Disney villains~! ♥♥♥

[atelierjoh.livejournal.com]

HADES IS AWESOME.

Throwing Belldandy at him never fails to make me squee.

[strifefully.livejournal.com]

LOL BEATING A DEAD HORSE but yeah, Hades rocks.

It was only after KHII that I was able to appreciate Kairi's character more too, and I think you do a pretty darn decent job of her. Xemnas is great times too, especially since he seems kind of like a tough character to grasp. All in all, good stuff! :D

[lunarwhirl.livejournal.com]

Hades is awesome. He's just the right combination of snarky and creepy, and honestly, he's one of my favorite characters here in Paixao. I haven't really seen any of your other characters much, but hopefully that will change. I do like what I've seen of them, though. ♥

[overlords_wrath]

Late comment is late... Hmmm Critique wise, I got nothing, other than I know you've heard me comment about how odd it is that you do the opposite tense, but it's not exactly a problem when you stay consistent. It is just a little odd, but eh. |D

You know I love your chars, and I'm SO glad you managed to get a feel for Xemnas, since I know I couldn't have. XD; SO uh. Yes. XD

[atelierjoh.livejournal.com]

OMFG I LOVE LEGALLY BLONDE I KINDA WANNA PLAY ELLE WOODS SOMEWHERE.

my_blessedbell
starembrace
glovescomeoff
mystorydammit
kanjecture

I know I've been slow, so anything other than that would be most appreciated.

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

Hey, guess what? I'm real damn glad I lured you over here. Even though you say you're struggling with Belldandy, I can't tell in the way you write her. It would be easy to boil her down to a flat, preachy Mary Sue, but you add a lot more complexity to her...I think because of your genuine love for the canon. You've been around the AMG block a few times and you know Bell has a lot more going for her than people would assume.

And color be surprised when I saw how well you rock Tidus' surfer boy arrogant slacker vibe! I loved our brief little interlude with Urd and Tidus at the pool. <3

I don't have much in the way of crit for you, actually. You're open to compromise OOCly (which is a huge relief for me when it comes down to canon interpretation between us) and you give a lot with your writing. I know it can be frustrating when things get slow and you struggle with CR sometimes, so I just want to thank you for sticking it out this far.

[tenshinomakai.livejournal.com]

Do feel free to HMD me as well as give me sweet, sweet sugar~

Urd (tenshinomakai)
Belle (beautiful_tale)
Flonne (fangirlforlove)
Megara (therightcurves)
Ursula (ladycecaelia)

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

¯\(ºдಠ)/¯

[sumofallfayth]

Both are cool, but nothing on speed of tags or that sort. :T

sumofallfayth

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

Soooo Yuna is adorable. I mean, like, DISNEY PRINCESS adorable. But you also make her kick ass, which is awesome because I think a lot of people would try to give her some passion and fury but end up delegating her to damsel in distress pretty quickly. I can't wait to see how you develop her character with the addition of Tidus in Paixao. :3

I DON'T REALLY HAVE CRIT FOR YOU EITHER. I am amazing at this HMD thing. :|

[shadowdancer09.livejournal.com]

HMD me, please! <3

Auron (kotetsu_blade)
Balthier (freedominthesky)
Braska (4thhighsummoner)
Kefka (thecourtgod)
Mao (madsciencemaou)
Marluxia (11deadlypetals)
Vyers (mysterious_moi)

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

Oh, Hayley~ <3 You're so good-natured and sweet to let us totally humiliate and torture your muses the way we do. :D No, seriously! Being able to let your characters lose/not come out on top is actually an asset in any roleplayer, I think. You have fun with your characters and with other people and I kind of love you for it! Sometimes I think you're the heart of Paixao.

But! In addition to allowing Vyers to suck, your writing on its own is a pleasure to read. You set scenes and build dialogue like a pro. It really makes it easy to tag back and I wish we DID tag each other more often.

Thank you for being such a giving roleplayer and mod. <3

[hitokiri-neko.livejournal.com]

Feel free to give me either, or just ask questions. I'm always happy to ramble

-limitbreakpilot
-venit_ex_silva
-scrapsplz
-theansweris4
-onabluemoon
-withwingstofly
-maybeimaleon
-dothevoice
-sceadu_gemynd

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

So many characters and I have, like...barely any CR with any of them. D: I'M SORRY. This is my fault. I hardly know any of your characters canons, not being into FF as much. I can say that you do the cool, intellectual and patient manipulator thing very well. Also, Reno is really fun to watch. I'm never sure what he'll do or say next.

But, yes. We need to have our characters interact more! I'm just not sure how to go about doing so.

[lyricalsummons.livejournal.com]

I am always open for love! =p Critique scares me to death, but I'm sure I could use the help. ♥

Lenne > lyricasummons
Lei'ella > sense_this
Ariel > dacapo_aria

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

Don't be scared of crit! Crit loves you! But, good news: I have no crit for you! Mostly because we haven't actually done a lot of interaction ICly. I'm hoping this changes with Lenne and Megara working together and you KNOW I'm having Ursula come after Ariel's skinny ass. 8D I don't think I'll have any complaints once I do expose myself more to your writing.

I will say that, on a personal note, I love to see you in chat. You're always willing to strike up a conversation with people and you make me smile.

re: Edit/SNAPS FOR ALL

[(Anonymous)]

I just wanted to say, that I appreciate the game's slowness sometimes. I've had to idle out of several RPs just because I couldn't keep up, but I'm really glad I could finally find a permanent home somewhere, without being shot because I can't make it to tag everyday.

Thanks for always being cool, Paixao!

Re: Edit/SNAPS FOR ALL

[overlords_wrath]

Awww, Anon ♥ Thank you! ^.^/ That just ahh asiojd;asa It's nice to know not everyone hates us for being slow. XD;;;

[overlords_wrath]

and here I am too if anyone has anything. ^^

Laharl {overlords_wrath}
Rozalin {a_sinful_rose}
Luke fon Fabre {keep_my_promise}
the Doctor {sir_doctor}
Maleficent {superior_evil}
Shantotto {sweets4thesoul}

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

HEY SWEET THANG

So, back in the day, I used to think roleplaying on LJ -- as fandom characters nonetheless -- was a waste of time and creativity. Then I played Disgaea and totally fell for the Laharl/Flonne ship. I wanted to see it developed more, wanted more CUTENESS, so I went online like I always do and tried to find some fanfiction that didn't make my eyes bleed. NOT AN EASY TASK, as you know. Then, like a candle in the darkness, there was a drabble by you! And on an RP journal no less! So I stalked your RP journals for Laharl like the creeper I am and it did come to pass that I, too, would become a livejournal roleplayer.

Long story short? You are, hands down, the best Laharl I have ever seen. Your love for the canon and the character show through everything you write and I watch your stuff just to see it. Even if our characters have no IC connection, I love seeing your Laharl post.

And your other characters are awesome too, of course. You're very dedicated and considerate of the voice you portray and, frankly, it inspires me. You make me want to be a better roleplayer.

Oh, and on a personal note, I love your art, your modding skills and your geek chic bad-assery.

[fuzzy-squish.livejournal.com]

What the hell, why not. XD ...But no crit on Iago, because he hardly exists. :P

Beast tolove_inreturn
Roxas oath_ofoblivion

[a-spikyfriend.livejournal.com]

Roxas is a pocket full of awesomesauce. Kairi's fun to bounce off him~

...I haven't really followed Beast, so no help there.

[noblestrike.livejournal.com]

A-Ah, am I late?!

Sapphire Rhodonite [noblestrike]
I'll get to tags asap, I'm so sorry. It's been such a busy past two weeks...

[atelierjoh.livejournal.com]

I've yet to play Disgaea 3, but Sapphire makes me smile at how quirky she already is just from one log.

Keep it up <3

[force-sight-gal.livejournal.com]

Shoaneb Culu force_sight_gal OKAY SO LIKE NOBODY KNOWS HER why must I pick such obscure people always but... if there's something to be said on style or whatever else I'd love to hear it. Or characterization if you do know Tales of the Jedi. =D Or you know, ANYTHING.

And... just for kicks.

Neirenn blackwatermage I am still tryyyying to get her voice back but she's stubborn and doesn't want to know me. But if there was anything about her that was off while I was playing her please let me know as I haven't given up on bringing her back at some point.

[shadowdancer09.livejournal.com]

I sadly don't know either character, but from the short time I threaded with Neirenn with Kefka, she seems to be an interesting character. I would not mind one bit if you brought her back. Shoaneb I need to see more of/thread with, I think. ...Yes, we need to do this sometime.

[travitaemorte.livejournal.com]

Ok, I'll bite.

Sara Sidle: scientific_lady
Donna Noble: oi_earthgirl (This one though, I'm fighting to get her voice back still, and I'm on the cusp of dropping her because of that fact. Please keep that in mind.)
Ziva David: 4letters4ninja
Vexen: son_of_shiva

[shadowdancer09.livejournal.com]

You are way too hard on yourself sometimes. <3 You do a great job with your characters! I always love doing stuff with Sara, and you are totally one of THE best Zivas on LJ (and I need to thread with Ziva sometime). I'm seriously excited as to what all you're going to do with Vexen. X3

[lunarwhirl.livejournal.com]

NiGHTS ([Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com])

Knuckles ([Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com])

Yorda ([Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com])

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

You give NiGHTS just the right amount of whimsy and unpredictability. I never know what it's going to do next, what side it'll be on and I think that's the essence of that character.

Knuckles is so fun to tease. I WANT TO TEASE HIM MORE WITH URD. :D

You know how adorable I find Yorda.

DONT MIND ME, JUST, Y'KNOW, LATE AS ALWAYS

[finalfayth.livejournal.com]

Anthing goes! Give it to me straight!

finalfayth & esperize & explosionism & strifefully

[nefariousgrey.livejournal.com]

FUCKIN' CAPSLOCK

Jecht is the only character I've had much interaction with, sadly. BUT HE IS AMAZING. Seriously, bouncing Urd and Megara off of him has been so amusing for me. You make him hilarious AND badass.

[divine_storm]

I'm late, new, and don't post so much...? *ducks*

divine_storm

[explosionism.livejournal.com]

I'm not familiar with her canon sadly, but! From what I've seen of her she seems really sassy! And I like it!